Thursday, September 5, 2013

God Bless the Christ Fox

Messi Jessi
Throws her books around
Does not like how her real name sounds.

I wish my name was Autumn
I like that name the best
Because it is unique and fun
And different from all the rest

Jessica is an okay name
I wish it fit me more
There's just too many syllables in there
Like Albus Dumbledore!

"God Bless the Christ Fox"
That's what my name means
I like it a lot because
It's funny and quirky and overall me

Jessica means "God Bless"
And God has blessed me true
Life gets hard sometimes
But my faith keeps me from being blue

Christine means Christ
Yes, I do believe in Him
But I try not to impose
My belief on them

Just like her last name,
She is sly like a fox
She also eats everyone's food
Just like Goldilocks.
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21 comments:

  1. IvysweirdSeptember 5, 2013 at 5:58 PM

    I love you (: *clap clap* that's fantastic.

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  2. Tiffany PaterSeptember 11, 2013 at 10:12 AM

    Very creative and unique!!

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  3. juarketsquareSeptember 11, 2013 at 10:12 AM

    Jessi, very creative. I love the rhyme scheme. Creative references too!

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  4. Zack G.September 11, 2013 at 10:13 AM

    I liked your poem a lot because it had a good rhyme scheme and made sense.

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  5. SanjanaSSeptember 11, 2013 at 10:13 AM

    Liked how you compared your name to fictional characters. Very good poem ! Nice job (:

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  6. Luis RamosSeptember 11, 2013 at 10:13 AM

    Good poem. I like the rhyme scheme. Lol

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  7. Adrianna RosadoSeptember 11, 2013 at 10:13 AM

    Your poem was unique, I liked how you talked about your whole name not just your first (: very good job.

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  8. Gabriella MogusSeptember 11, 2013 at 10:13 AM

    That was really really good. I loved your rhyme scheme , I loved it . Good job Jessi (:

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  9. Justin whyelSeptember 11, 2013 at 10:13 AM

    liked that you mentioned stealing people's food like goldilocks

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  10. Tori C.September 11, 2013 at 10:13 AM

    I liked how you made it completely random but still kept to the topic. You included yourself and things that you love and justo made it overall youish. Very, creative.

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  11. Destanie CamarilloSeptember 11, 2013 at 10:13 AM

    I like your rhyme scheme it was really nice and had a good flow.

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  12. Bryson BSeptember 11, 2013 at 10:13 AM

    Good job very well said and god bless the Christ fox

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  13. Champion of the GlaceonSeptember 11, 2013 at 10:14 AM

    The various references and such on the page and in the poem were entertaining and fun.

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  14. Leanna TSeptember 11, 2013 at 10:14 AM

    I like the stanza where it said "god has blessed me true". It's a very good poem and the rhyme scheme is perfect :)

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  15. LeahSeptember 11, 2013 at 10:14 AM

    I like the rhyme scheme

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  16. UnknownSeptember 11, 2013 at 10:15 AM

    Awesome unique Poem !!!! ^_^ its better than mine!!!!

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  17. Darrian MeadowsSeptember 11, 2013 at 10:15 AM

    I liked the way it rhymed and albus dumbledore was funny

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  18. Sarah HarveySeptember 13, 2013 at 6:37 AM

    Jessi stop stealing my food. Ok? Ok.

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  19. Kayla CoatsSeptember 13, 2013 at 6:41 AM

    I loved this yours was my favorite !!!!!

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